In which a lot is explained but not a lot happens...! D'oh! REALLY bad planning on my part, I didn't mean for this part to be.. mainly just standing around and explaining things! SO so so many revisions to the story were made while making this part though so... just.. really bad planning on my part! ! I'm sorry~ I promise it will be more exciting from here on out!
in the part where they get to the controll room you made a typo ... Val said "So theres the portal...I'm shure you know what to from here right?" You skiped the word "do" in that sentance
great chapter, I love some details like the eyes moving.
Nooooooo